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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2010-09-08 03:04 PM

Sunbeam bursts new
pewter skies, lasering
through woodlands, metamorphosing
emerald green leaves
to saffron-amber.
Fallen leaves abandoned
to sparkle on
moonlit forest floors
until my arrival.
Stepping out through
opaque brume, wrapped
in mist silk, softening
my boot tread.
Emerging from woodland
and murk, orange
orb of the
sun burns fume
away to reveal
a day of
fullsome beauty unconfined.

Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2010-09-08 03:46 PM

oh...sigh

so sensual that I desire to be there

very nice GR

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

2 posted 2010-09-08 04:34 PM

Mmn a lovely poem - I can smell autumn coming off the page & feel the warm glow of sunlight peeking through the leaves.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-09-08 07:01 PM

quote:
a day of
fullsome beauty unconfined

You really made me experience this beauty with your most colorful words.

Enjoyed this very much.

Love,
Margherita

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2010-09-08 07:27 PM

"brume" I've learned a new word. Thanks for taking me into your words and world.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2010-09-08 08:05 PM

Lovely. I Really enjoyed reading about your trek. latearrival

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2010-09-08 08:27 PM

I love Autumn and this is a lovely Autumn poem.
Ida

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

7 posted 2010-09-08 08:57 PM

One could easily picture themselves in such beautiful surroundings.

Enjoyed the journey!

~Sunkissed

easy1
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since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

8 posted 2010-09-08 10:22 PM

Very neatly crafted.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2010-09-09 11:05 AM

Aha, dear Phil! I see that you are still fit and in fine poetic form! Did you know that I ALWAYS read your poems at least twice? The first time I eagerly read through it to read your poetic pearls. The next time I go through it slowly ~ soaking in the visuals and the atmosphere.

You're a 'natural' poet!

Sending a warm, late summer hug your way,

Linda

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

10 posted 2010-09-11 07:22 PM

absolutely superb 'write' ...
[grand-fine imagery]

MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning'!

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