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Can a Dream be Fullfilled
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Can a Dream be Fullfilled |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Can a dream be fullfilled? One of having a soulmate to love and care for as you always wanted In this storyland of passion and sex, so wanting of one another... A picturesuqe setting of living in an old victorian castle (camelot) Fireplaces offering a radiant red-orange blase of warmth, as the dark Feburary blizzards cast heavy bound snow to the wailing winds...days passing Watching the mixed colors of spring flowers and the red, yellow roses as they bloom across the thick dark green studded lawns Sitting on a porch, sipping on a cold refreshing drink, as the warm summer breezes send it's scent of purple lilacs into the air Carressing and feeling the soul mind Giving way to night falls peering soft yellow glow... As the rounded guilded moon, moves slowly across the lightly, blue-gray clouded sky Whispers of happiness, contentment are shared with instant smiles and hugs As nearby birdsongs and morning doves sing of life and love... Can such a dream be fullfilled... written to me by Allen Jefferies 2009 |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I noticed that the style was different than your own. But the poem is sweet and was a lovely present from your friend. And yes I think that such a dream can be fulfilled. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Absolutely  Thanks for sharing such a wonderful gift. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thank you EB and rwood for taking the time to read and comment. No, it's not my style, but I wish I could write like he does. Free style poems I find hard to do. I can't write poems without rhyme, running around my head all the time. Kat >^..^< |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, Katahdinnnnnnnnnn... By your friend, but sends you the hugest hugs anyway. Jaime |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Myyyyyyyyy, Karen!!!!! How wonderfully descriptive and explicit! I am deaf blind, and you make me see the colors and the Moon, And take me to a place I really haven't been. Pip punches through the triple barriers of Time, Circumstance and Space that separates us all apart. Who would tell me all these things in person??? Thank you and thank to the mountain, which is also a living spirit. Daddy goose |
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