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Can a Dream be Fullfilled

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katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.


0 posted 09-07-2010 11:40 PM       View Profile for katahdin   Email katahdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for katahdin


Can a dream be fullfilled?
One of having a soulmate
to love and care for as you always wanted
In this storyland of passion and sex,
so wanting of one another...

A picturesuqe setting of living
in an old victorian castle (camelot)
Fireplaces offering a radiant red-orange blase of warmth,
as the dark Feburary blizzards cast heavy bound snow
to the wailing winds...days passing
Watching the mixed colors of spring flowers
and the red, yellow roses as they bloom
across the thick dark green studded lawns
Sitting on a porch, sipping on a cold refreshing drink,
as the warm summer breezes send it's scent
of purple lilacs into the air
Carressing and feeling the soul mind
Giving way to night falls peering soft yellow glow...
As the rounded guilded moon, moves slowly
across the lightly, blue-gray clouded sky
          
Whispers of happiness, contentment are shared
with instant smiles and hugs
As nearby birdsongs and morning doves sing
of life and love...        
Can such a dream be fullfilled...        


written to me by Allen Jefferies 2009
© Copyright 2010 Karen A . Blackburn - All Rights Reserved
Earl Brinkman
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since 03-03-2010
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Osaka, Japan


1 posted 09-07-2010 11:47 PM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

I noticed that the style was different than your own.  But the poem is sweet and was a lovely present from your friend.  And yes I think that such a dream can be fulfilled.
rwood
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since 02-29-2000
Posts 3797
Tennessee


2 posted 09-08-2010 06:42 AM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

Absolutely

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful gift.
katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.


3 posted 09-13-2010 11:39 PM       View Profile for katahdin   Email katahdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for katahdin

Thank you EB and rwood for taking the time to read and comment.
No, it's not my style, but I wish I could write like he does. Free style poems I find hard to do.
I can't write poems without rhyme,
running around my head all the time.
Kat >^..^<
Daddy Goose38
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obama's a rice paper tiger


4 posted 05-28-2012 11:12 AM       View Profile for Daddy Goose38   Email Daddy Goose38   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daddy Goose38

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, Katahdinnnnnnnnnn...
By your friend, but sends you the hugest hugs anyway.
Jaime
Daddy Goose38
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obama's a rice paper tiger


5 posted 06-26-2017 07:24 PM       View Profile for Daddy Goose38   Email Daddy Goose38   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daddy Goose38

Myyyyyyyyy, Karen!!!!!
How wonderfully descriptive and explicit!
I am deaf blind, and you make me see the colors and the Moon,
And take me to a place I really haven't been.
Pip punches through the triple barriers of Time, Circumstance and Space that separates us all apart.
Who would tell me all these things in person???
Thank you and thank to the mountain, which is also a living spirit.
Daddy goose
 
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