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rwood
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0 posted 2010-09-07 11:31 AM


Somewhere,
within the pearl of your wings
my name is instinctively written in veins
You like to needle me
with your neon flit & shimmer,
lighting just long enough
to show off

Did you follow me
to Le Rouge?

Hovering warm cobblestones,
waiting for me to reappear
outside the bistro,
so you could sense the fresh mint
through my skin.

How did you find me
in the village?

Where for a thousand years
people have sold their wares,
and my eyes told too much
as I spied-home one more pair
of red shoes.

How do you pick me
out of a crowd?

Iā€”among a roving mass
that was moving past
The White Places
where stone, so plentifully,
told of rare polished men.

I touched you once,

as a girl, among the cattails
& reeds of the creek
I sat in mud, and felt its coolness
speak to me between
my fingers.

I must have made a pact with you, there

on the first day of summer
when I fell in love
with the sparkle of the sun
that was caught in a prism-web
of mist across the waters.

I knew; moss was to my youth
as Emily was--when she penned
of death and tombs
Lie not, I, too still enough
for spore to steal my voice.

Aye, You are
my wing-quill messenger
who is fond of the freckles
on my shoulder
and the birthmark on my arm.

When the days drag on
and I seek adventure
you are with me, Gypsy-fish,
between the sheers of realms
and lands unknown.

Nymph at heart, naiad perhaps,
Arethusa--at times, between
the springs and salts, we are
of wind & watered earth
Pathways, do change.

I wear your likeness
in silver, when we winter



© Copyright 2010 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2010-09-07 11:57 AM


sometimes I find a left behind cowboy boot in one of the dunes...I pick it up and ask it to tell me where it had been and who it had been worn by...and did they love often..you make me think of cowboy boots and sleep slick moan music in this..enjoyed it ms
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2 posted 2010-09-07 12:00 PM


Ah~~~  so good to see this here....

it is always a pleasure to read your words, and savor the flavor of your imagery...

as for rust buckets.... hardly ma'am...
and if you think so, th best way to remove the rust is to use the talent. I ~hope~
you take the hint...I would like to see more of your words..



Sunkissed
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3 posted 2010-09-07 01:21 PM


I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more comments.

Beautiful writing!

~Sunkissed

katahdin
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4 posted 2010-09-07 09:17 PM


Beautiful!
Kat >^..^<

rwood
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5 posted 2010-09-07 10:39 PM


D~ Thanks for thinking and penning your uniquely you-mind. It's great to see you're still here and I hope all is going smoothly for you and yours.

Ron~ "Iridescent Blues" really did inspire this. Technical writing tends to steal my poetic license, so it's been a while since I took a joy-ride. LOL. Thank you for all your encouragement. I'll try to continue. Especially when you keep handing me the keys

Sunkissed~ Thanks so much for reading and leaving your kind thoughts. Much appreciated, dear poetess.

Kat~ Bless you, and thank you.

always,
reg


Earth Angel
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6 posted 2010-09-08 01:02 AM


Well this beauty was sure as little green apples was worth the wait! Hi, Reg! I see that you have been keeping your pen ~ and your mind! ~ sharp! That is a fine piece of writing. I enjoyed it so much that I am saving it to my library.
Love the tone, the imagery, and the story! Well, done!

Warm hug,
Linda



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7 posted 2010-09-08 08:29 AM


Ma'am, if I knew what keys to hand you I surely would... :-)

it is truly good to see you back.

Eusta B. Mae
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8 posted 2010-09-10 09:53 AM


rwood-It is obvious by this piece what your friends are raving about and why they missed you so...I'm joining their choir! ebm
Sunshine
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9 posted 2010-09-10 12:29 PM




I did not have a dragonfly for you,
my friend, but this fellow came by
the other day, and waited patiently
for his photo to be taken...

just for you.

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

rwood
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10 posted 2010-09-10 01:17 PM


Linda~ Hey there pretty poetess! I'm blessed to have you among my guests to this piece of nature. You've always brought me warmth and elegance with your thoughts. Thank you, for you

Ron~ You didn't just hand me some keys, but you helped jump-start me poetic battery & even gave the old clunker a push down the road to expression...but I admit, the rest was easy-go. Getting started, not so easy sometimes Thank you.

ebm~ Aww...I'm ever grateful to be among them, the wonderful ones who help me to have a voice through inspiration and saving a spot for me to occasionally chime in. Thanks for adding to the beauty of the song. Good harmony! Yeah

Sunnyone~ You never fail to warm my window with your beauty. Creatures & cousins of the wing, so inspiring to the pen.

Thanks & Hugs All.



Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2010-09-11 12:00 PM


oh my ~soh....It is so wonderful to find you and your words here today...you've been so sorely missed and this is a pure treat to find...

So glad to read you.  Ya'll come back soon now, ya hear!!


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12 posted 2010-09-12 02:09 AM




A little something for you.

I absolutely just loved this,
and love the fact that they are called damselflies in honor of us girls.  

Amaryllis
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13 posted 2010-09-12 02:17 AM


Ah... this is just so very exquisite... saw the original in the thread in the lounge, and fell in love right then; beautiful writing!  Such a pleasure to read  
Best~
Sharon (Amaryllis)

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14 posted 2010-09-13 10:15 PM


must have made a pact with you, there

on the first day of summer
when I fell in love
with the sparkle of the sun
that was caught in a prism-web
of mist across the waters.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You make my breath catch in the very best way.  
You and your poetry have been missed, and this is such a gift.

.... you write beautifully, Regina~

rwood
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15 posted 2010-09-14 09:33 AM


Somy~ Hey gorgeous!! I've missed you, too. It's my treat to find you today. Thanks for the blessing of being here Big hugs and I look forward to seeing more of you.

Sharon~ What a pretty gift! The colors are lovely, and the thought even more lovely as you are. Thanks for adding to my collection It's wonderful to share nature's messenger with you >!<

Amaryllis~ Thank you, for the thread, the inspiration, and for your own exquisite offerings you so bountifully bestow in poetry and spirit. Blessings to you & your talented pen.

Blues~ What a pleasure to have you sing by the way you do, always encouraging and always a cherished breeze of poetic sentiment. Thanks for reading and leaving me your precious notes.

May all be embraced by this beautiful day and blessed with plenty to ink about

always,
reg


Martie
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16 posted 2010-09-15 06:27 PM


Regina....Love your words and familiarity of feeling from a poem I wrote back in 03 about a dragonfly.  Yours is more delicious.  It's wonderful to read you!

On the other side of midway
Thought paints a line
And the mist falls   it falls
But it is made of air
Tell me       is it really there?



bel1e
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17 posted 2010-09-15 08:28 PM


there is some lovely imagery in this~enjoyed~

             

rwood
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18 posted 2010-09-17 06:23 AM


Martie~ I'm very grateful for the connection. Thank you for sharing a slice of write. I do so enjoy your poetry and your thoughts.

bel1e~ Thank you for your sweet note. Happy to share with you, poetess.

Morning, all. Gonna be a hot day in my little  September valley. Hope yall are enjoying your Friday, where ever you may be.  

Margherita
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19 posted 2010-09-19 08:27 AM


quote:
I wear your likeness
in silver, when we winter



Delightfully creative. I enjoyed this mystical write greatly.

Love,
Margherita

rwood
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20 posted 2010-09-22 05:46 AM


Margherita~ Your comment delights me Thank you so much for reading.
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