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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2010-09-02 02:13 PM


Yesterdays...
reverberate
throughout the years
like an echo,
somewhat hollow
and far away.
And yet they dance
in the moonlight of life
to a song called Memory.

                Ida Werrett

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (09-02-2010 03:41 PM).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2010-09-02 02:30 PM


the essence of memories captured with their importance well noted...

enjoyed Ida..

Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-09-02 02:39 PM


Good capture Ida!
"And yet they dance
in the moonlight of life
to a song called Memory
I loved this image!" ebm

OwlSA
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3 posted 2010-09-02 06:26 PM


Lovely, Ida.

Owl

katahdin
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4 posted 2010-09-02 07:52 PM


Nicely done! enyoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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Mi now
5 posted 2010-09-02 08:47 PM


Very wistful and pretty! I liked  
~A

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2010-09-02 11:18 PM


Every time I read your short verses I am convinced it's my favorite.

And this is a real gem!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
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So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2010-09-03 04:02 AM


Thank you all for your interest and taking the time to comment.
                             Ida

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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8 posted 2010-09-05 03:17 PM


Yes, those memories do dance, don't they?  Well said, Ida.

Helen

Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2010-09-06 03:52 PM


Very very captivating and true, dear Ida!

Love,
Margherita

rosepetals36
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Pa
10 posted 2010-09-08 01:06 PM


I really really like this

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2010-09-08 01:18 PM


My dear Ida Belle, may your Memory be forever rife with rich life songs!

Love,
Linda

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
12 posted 2010-09-08 01:51 PM


I appreciate all of the lovely comments and saw nothing "lame" in your comment. rosepetals.
Thank you.
                              Ida

Sunkissed
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13 posted 2010-09-08 02:13 PM


Enjoyed the thoughts in your poem, Ida.

Excellent writing!

~Sunkissed

Goldenrose
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14 posted 2010-09-08 06:20 PM


Short and with a nice feel to it..enjoyed...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron.

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