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tattooedsweetheart07
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0 posted 2010-09-02 07:19 AM


I hear the sound of your heart racing...
Like tons of hooves of horses racing on the sands;
Even when your not near...
I still feel you next to me,
Like the cold crisp waves along the shores that wash away trace of you;
I lay on the sands and stare at the stars above...
Wondering if you might be doin the same thing,
Just wishing on that same bright star;
Oh how I long for you to wrap me in your arms...
Just like the blanket I wrap up in I feel your Embrace and your warmth that warms my skin;
I walk in the dark moon light...
So that no one can see my cry tears that I cry for you;
When I awake in the morning in my bed....
I lay there a few extra minutes so that I can see the shadow the the sunlight casts apon my bed;
Oh how I want to be loved you...
But how can you love a dream?

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Nocturnal Pulse
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1 posted 2010-09-02 07:24 AM


Empathize completely - dreams can be cruel.
tattooedsweetheart07
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2 posted 2010-09-02 07:30 AM


Yes it's true, but sometimes dreams are the only place you can escape the real world and have a short time of what you really want...
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2010-09-02 12:19 PM


the differences between our dreams and the waking moments can be a sharply drawn line..and those dreams always seem to leave an after ache...


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2010-09-02 12:44 PM


Dream on! Hopefully there will be a happy ending (a new beginning?) which you can manifest into reality in the light of day!

Sweet dreams!


EA

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5 posted 2010-09-04 09:36 PM


"Oh how I want to be loved you...
But how can you love a dream?"

I hear you and feel you sweetheart
and know the dream you speak of

D.Lester Young
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6 posted 2010-09-05 02:11 PM


well written, enjoyed
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