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Amberzlynnc
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0 posted 2010-09-02 01:41 AM



A glimpse into the past was seen
when I met him, first day at Kean.
Familiar personality,
one that had brought pain to me.

Promiscuous, but yet serene,
a glimpse into the past was seen.
Biceps bulging, short sleeves cuffed,
I knew him not, but well enough.

Intentions not admirable,
though he was still desirable.
A glimpse into the past was seen,
dousing old wounds with his saline.

This time I won’t be so naïve.
The words he says, I won’t believe.
Refuse to be where I have been,
a glimpse into the past was seen.


*So things make more sense, "Kean" is the university I am attending, haha.

*Amber

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Nocturnal Pulse
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1 posted 2010-09-02 07:06 AM


Ah, one of 'those' types, hehe.
Good write.

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-09-02 12:17 PM


sounds like the "bad boys" have an attraction that your expierence tells you is trouble...  

which will win out?


nicely done... enjoyed the read poet

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2010-09-02 12:41 PM


As the saying goes, "Once bitten ~ twice shy!"

Letting your conscience (and past mrmories) be your guide, is always a wise move!


EA


Amberzlynnc
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4 posted 2010-09-02 01:27 PM


Thanks guys!

*Amber

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