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Not the end |
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Nocturnal Pulse Member
since 2010-08-12
Posts 84Australia |
Floating among the dusty dreams The morning remains elusive Putrid downfall replaced rays and beams Will nothing be conclusive? It’s humble, modest and fair To take victory in stride And refuse to share It’s yours to hide Lifes purpose to betray When enduring despair It’s labelled cowardly to display That you're unable to bear To remove that crooked mask And acquire a hand Desperate to ask But unable to stand Another rhyme to unrequited love Or dejected lament A devout Salmn to the above Or simply passion spent It’s never truly hidden Our suffering is written On our face, it’s forbidden But in literature, we’re forgiven To admit defeat sometime No hand to hold, none to lend Merely human to cry, it’s no crime Pain is life not the end |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
A lot of truth in your words, and nicely written too! Enjoyed reading! ~Sunkissed  |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
Really appreciated this. Enjoy hearing someone's different impression on life, but one I still relate to. Kudos. Novus_Os Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Well spoken. Owl |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done Kat >^..^< |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I enjoyed your work |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
Lovely... enjoyed |
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