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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-08-29 10:38 PM


Getting to Know Her Better

In less
than a minute
I knew
I wanted
to see her undressed,
caress her breasts,
come together
get to know
her better,
but that
would take time
and a sharing
of her heart
and mine.  

JamesLee
27August
2010




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nourzihane
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Algeria
1 posted 2010-08-30 05:42 AM


[This message has been edited by Ron (08-31-2010 11:03 PM).]

2islander2
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2 posted 2010-08-30 02:11 PM


such a wonder James, a little perfection of sentiments...

regards

yann

Margherita
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3 posted 2010-08-31 04:16 AM


The "sharing of hearts", so good that you consider that, beyond the mere desire, dear James.

Very enjoyable.

Love,
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
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4 posted 2010-08-31 11:39 PM


A powerful write, so much said with so few words.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2010-09-01 09:36 AM


Hello, Hawaii Man! I agree! It's best to have the hearts entwine before the bodies do!

Aloha hugs,
Linda

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2010-09-06 01:00 AM


Thank you nourzihane, 2islander2, Margherita, Earl and Earth Angel for the wonderful responses...and thank you nourzihane for the nice illustration...James
Sunshine
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7 posted 2010-09-06 09:37 AM


Now James...this is all you...and it's good to read you again.




jwesley
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8 posted 2010-09-06 10:30 AM


Wonderful write James!!! and I love what nourzihane did with it....


j.

Brad Majors
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9 posted 2010-10-22 01:12 AM


powerful write!
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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10 posted 2010-10-22 04:58 AM


The need to share your heart and learn of another's is portrayed beautifully, and in less than a minute too. Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

ethome
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11 posted 2010-10-22 06:45 AM


Great emotional rush at first and then a flow to the seeking of longevity in the relationship. .....Well done!!

Eric

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2010-10-24 11:17 PM


Thank you Sunshine, jwesley, Brad, s1nfully and ethome for the wonderful responses...James
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