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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Out of nowhere you appeared tired eyes rejuvenated from your gentle glow memories like waterfalls flowed at last, you are here at last, you are here harnessed sun is your embrace sweet as fallen petals, is your face I hold in my heart so dear I hold in my heart so dear all you are, is yet to be as significant as a babe born upon the knee this bounty of heart has set me free ne'er more these tears ~Sunkissed  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely written bit of joy...and of homecoming... |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank You kindly, Sir! ~Sunkissed |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Petals fall, and the petaller live to bloom again... An excellent and happy poem you have written. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you so much, Easy1 for taking a peek and for the kind words. ~Sunkissed |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
I have been gone too long, but your poem is a refreshing delight. Love the flow and format of the poem. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I understand about being away. I too have just recently returned. Thank you for the kind and thoughtful words. ~Sunkissed |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Beautifully captured joy! This is how it feels... I can relate ~Amaryllis |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
A compliment indeed coming from such a fine writer as yourself. Thank you! ~Sunkissed |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"at last, you are here harnessed sun is your embrace sweet as fallen petals, is your face I hold in my heart so dear" What a beauty! Great write. JL |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
JL, glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading! ~Sunkissed |
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brian thomas madden Junior Member
since 2010-07-08
Posts 32Ireland (between an ocean and a rock) |
Beautifully written, especially like the lines "Out of nowhere you appeared tired eyes rejuvenated from your gentle glow at last, you are here harnessed sun is your embrace sweet as fallen petals, is your face" |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Hello Brian, thanks for the kind words. They are greatly apprecited. ~Sunkissed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
James, nice of you to say. thank you much! ~Sunkissed |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Beautiful! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Kat, I'm glad you enjoyed. ~Sunkissed |
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