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Open Poetry #46

Too Much to Say

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-08-24 08:42 AM

Too much
To say
Words go inside
They coinside
With feelings
Only to collide
With thoughts
I hide
From
And silence
Is all I have
To say for myself

EBM(C)7/18/10

[This message has been edited by Eusta B. Mae (08-24-2010 12:58 PM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-08-24 12:48 PM

nicely portrayed...
again, tightly woven and concise..

enjoyed

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-08-24 01:00 PM

Thanks Cpat- I appreciate the feedback, thanks for checking me out. ebm

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

3 posted 2010-08-24 08:07 PM

I`ll give it to you straight - I loved this.

Elric
Junior Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 43
southbend, WA

4 posted 2010-08-25 04:31 AM

this is awesome

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-08-25 08:21 AM

Earl-Thanks alot for letting me know! ebm
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Elric-Awsome? You're too kind, thank you, thank you!ebm

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