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Open Poetry #46
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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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Peterborough,England
0 posted 2010-08-24 12:25 PM


To many sweets
Will rot your teeth
And the dentist wont
Be best pleased

Your teeth will run away
Because there afraid of decay
And your breath smells
If mouldy old cheese
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1 posted 2010-08-24 07:45 AM

(chuckling)
  cute write..
I can see these strung together as a childrens book...
enjoyed
kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
2 posted 2010-08-25 08:08 AM

I did think about it for my neice

though if i did i would have to work on spelling lol
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