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0 posted 2010-08-21 03:25 PM


   Autumnal Whispers
  
     lingering sunset
cicada songs of summer
  Autumn whispering

       --- b. e. adams (8/21/2010)

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1 posted 2010-08-23 11:16 AM


I recently heard my first cicada - Man, those babies are loud!  This is beautiful, Bruce.  Beautiful.

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2 posted 2010-08-23 01:07 PM


Though it is very hot here, somehow I can feel Autumn "whispering" too. Lovely write.
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3 posted 2010-08-23 05:14 PM


Autumn is one of my favorite seasons. And as you say, it is just a whisper away...

lovely write.

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4 posted 2010-08-31 11:39 PM




we have been "blessed" with cicadas too. they have left their exoskeletons attached to the side of the house and moved on. I heard the merest whisper of autumn this morning Bruce. it was delightful and your poem brought the memory back.

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5 posted 2010-09-07 09:50 PM


tonight the wind sighs, shedding the heat of this summer, escorting autumn by the hand.  Loved this little Haiku~
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6 posted 2010-09-08 11:25 AM


I cant wait for the beauty of autumn! I liked

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7 posted 2010-09-08 07:08 PM


Hi Bruce...The passage of time can be so lovely...like this poem
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