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Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
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0 posted 2010-08-20 12:38 PM



Dusty shades of dew kissed roses
bless thy eyes with matrimonial
vision:

An endless spill of silk and satin
frosty pearls beyond a willowed
veil

A trembling hand waiting to be taken
bound of gold, yes strengthened with
bonds silver

Gift of wings humble & reverent
at beloved feet lay

So faint now, freedom's light

Sun kissed brandy are beacons
pearlish smiles, an invitation
for life

Oh, gentle night promise me storms
yes, a bountiful yield 'til morning
finds accomplishment of
souls join

so journ we...

~Sunkissed



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2010-08-20 04:01 AM


quote:
So faint now, freedom's light


Even in midst of the most romantic of events there is this perception of a restrained freedom.

Very lovely write.

Margherita

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-08-20 07:48 AM


a very romantic piece ma'am...

well sculpted from the atoms that hold together such unions and the freedom one can find by being a part of another soul

I enjoyed...

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2010-08-20 12:52 PM


This is lovely, dear...and so good to read you again!




BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2010-08-20 07:29 PM


This is so pretty, your visuals compliment the sweeping emotions in such a lovely way.

Grogeous poetry, and such a pleasure to read.


Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
5 posted 2010-08-20 07:53 PM


This is tremulous with hope and sooo beautifully penned.  I love the feeling of newness here, a book with open pages waiting for love to fill it with life.  Loveliness.  ~K
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