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Eldest
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since 2010-06-15
Posts 177
Alabama

0 posted 2010-08-17 04:20 PM



Nine months of waiting,patiently most of the time
Nine months of wondering,what color were your eyes?
Nine months of waiting to see who you look like,
Nine months of wondering if you would be alright.

Now you're here and none of it really matters
You're perfect as you are and you look like you
There are no words to say what joy is in my heart
For you are the joy in my heart now, beside your sister

Black hair, blue eyes, wise owl expressions
You are the answer to many prayers,ten fingers and toes
There are not enough love words in the world
To say how loved you are right now

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2010-08-17 06:11 PM


Congratulations!

This is your Mother heart releasing the overwhelming joy. Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
2 posted 2010-08-17 07:33 PM


Very nicely worded. Best wishes to all, and a nice multi-tiered mobile for over baby's crib, please.
Earl Brinkman
Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
3 posted 2010-08-17 08:21 PM


Everyone loves a baby because they are sweet as is this poem.
Amaryllis
Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
4 posted 2010-08-17 09:40 PM


Ah, motherhood.. when your heart gets out of your chest and goes walking around... it can be terrifying, but oh, so rewarding!  There`s nothing like it.
~Amaryllis

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2010-08-18 11:46 AM




"and you look like you"

I can feel the love for your little Ethan in these beautiful words.

rosepetals36
Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137
Pa
6 posted 2010-08-26 10:43 AM


Aww. This made me smile Isn't motherhood amazing!

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

Bec
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since 2001-02-23
Posts 475
Canberra
7 posted 2010-08-31 10:22 PM


Lovely! My sister has just had her fourth, and each time it's still as exciting as the first!

"I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20

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