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Nocturnal Pulse
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since 2010-08-12
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Australia

0 posted 2010-08-15 09:04 AM


A mountains craggy hills
It's splender and snowy fills.
It's geographical eccentricity.
It's blatant unmistakeability.
The fault lines, the jagged hooks.
The rough edges, crevices and nooks.
Complacent in it's intimidation.
In its presence, men hasten.
They attest to it's monumentality.
The danger trimumphing it's fatality.
High atop' resting places for the grace.
Down below, adrift its massive face.
Sparse cover for the wind-blown nights.
Peering up to it's rigid heights.

© Copyright 2010 Shane Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2010-08-15 01:03 PM


Being passionate about mountains makes me deeply appreciate this poem. Impressive!

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2010-08-15 11:21 PM


Great description of mountains, enjoyed.
                                     Ida

katahdin
Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
3 posted 2010-08-16 01:41 AM


I love the mountains! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2010-08-16 01:31 PM


beautiful scenery here
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