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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest

0 posted 2010-08-14 02:45 PM





deep thoughts

white caps on ocean
fog bounces from waves to rocks
capturing my thoughts



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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2010-08-14 06:52 PM


a very nice image you paint... fog often captures my thoughts, but I don't have the waves
Jesse Jaymz
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2 posted 2010-08-15 12:16 PM


Had me at ocean.  Very nice!!
Amaryllis
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Mi now
3 posted 2010-08-15 12:36 PM


Yes, very beautiful! Thanks for sharing this with us  
~Amaryllis

passing shadows
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4 posted 2010-08-15 01:39 AM


beautiful! the ocean does do that for sure!
Margherita
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5 posted 2010-08-15 04:38 AM


Yes, nothing like the rhythmic waves to make us plunge into depth of thought. Beautifully expressed, dear Marti.

Love,
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
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6 posted 2010-08-15 07:50 AM


Iliked the line of fog bouncing from waves to rocks.  That was original.
easy1
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7 posted 2010-08-15 07:56 AM


^Yes that is a very good line. The pic doesn't really do it justice.. I have experienced, as many have, the driving onshore fog of which you speak so eloquently here.
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