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katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2010-08-13 12:25 PM


With these times being what they are,
Many still fighting from afar

All soldiers can relate,
Try to escape from the hate

Pray to God to set them free,
Home is where they want to be

To loved ones arms they crave,
But for now they must be brave

The war rages on for many a day,
And home is so, so far away

Bags so needed fall from plane,
With letters from home to keep them sane

So the soldier says "Please write to me!"
And for a short while, he's Home, he's Free!

[This message has been edited by katahdin (08-15-2010 01:57 AM).]

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Nocturnal Pulse
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1 posted 2010-08-13 01:41 AM


Very nice, Kat.
Meow.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2010-08-13 02:20 AM


touching piece here

freedom is a blessing

Amaryllis
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3 posted 2010-08-13 02:32 AM


Too bad freedom couldn`t be free..  yes, they all need our support and letters!
~Amaryllis

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
4 posted 2010-08-13 02:45 AM


Nocturnal pulse - Thanks for the inspiration!

Passing Shadows and Amaryllis - thanks for reading my poems. Letters from home give them hope. And you are right freedom is not free.
Kat >^..^<

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2010-08-13 07:08 AM


It can be easy to take for granted what those connection mean..to those who serve so far from home and in harms way...

very nicely done ...

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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6 posted 2010-08-13 08:00 AM


A soldier`s life is a lonely one and a letter does bring them comfort.  You did something nice with this poem and you should be proud of yourself.
Richy
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7 posted 2010-08-13 10:19 AM



Yes, drop letters not bombs.

We can't do enough for our heroes afar.

Wonderfully put!
Richard

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