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Akashan Dreams

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                Akashan Dreams

Come sail these misty morning waters
on this lovely lake of dreams
and watch the traceless wakes,
of all that moves or changes here,
coalescing as one with water, sky
  and consciousness ...
separateness being but a stubbornly
  persistent illusion.

                    --- b. e. adams (8/7/2010)

© Copyright 2010 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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I relate so well to your poetry, Bruce. I collect them all because I feel they speak directly to me.
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Very good!

Nature's sartorial splendor, human satori... and there surely can be a taste or hint of Nirvana about the misty morning, especially upon a wilderness lake (and especially headed east).

Well-worded and intuitive, thanks!
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Stunning, dear Bruce.

... and for the second time today I read "coalescing" ... great word.

Love,
Margherita
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4 posted 08-09-2010 09:34 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Good morning, Bruce!

"Come sail these misty morning waters
on this lovely lake of dreams"

~ Sounds mighty fine to me!!!

Happy sailing!
Linda
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A breath of beauty and just look who was here right before me.

xoxoxo
Alison
 
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