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Jamesp85
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since 2010-08-05
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0 posted 2010-08-05 07:36 PM



Taking Your Pain.


You came into my life with meaning and love.
You needed my help as I gazed into you eyes.
God sent me forth to relieve all your pain.
And show you where your real beauty lies.

I took your hand so warm and comforting.
I took your heart to put next to mine.
Secured from all of life's empty feelings.
To ease the worries of your broken mind.

I walked with you in my cluttered brain.
As I dreamt of peace,love, and our chosen path.
We were full of love as we walked the beaches.
And we gazed upon one another with a cheerful laugh.

For in our hearts we knew we held.
All the love we would ever need.
We kissed as wind blew our hearts.
And we knew our love would always succeed.

I took your pain away on that very beach.
I brushed your fears deep into the sand.
All the bad was washed back to sea.
And we walked to heavens gates hand in hand.

© Copyright 2010 James Powell - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2010-08-09 01:14 AM


wow, this could be something my husband could have written to me! What a night on the beach that was!

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Sunshine
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2 posted 2010-08-09 12:55 PM


A wonderful tribute.

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