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2islander2
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0 posted 2010-08-04 11:21 AM



Sometimes Poetry is unconsidered, as a bird
without nest, as if nobody was reading the
move of trees and the truth they design in
the walk of mankind. A different sun hangs
in the words of the poet, it is not the real
sun, it is the will to free oneself of the deep
restrictions of the sun. Love in poetry can be
an illusion of fire, a look of indecency in the
present which takes place of the multiple
caresses of past..It is true and it is not, the poet
invents unknown images which conduct the
steps of a staggering world which doesn’t
know much better than the unrest of its soul.

© Copyright 2010 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2010-08-04 03:34 PM


an insightful read....
I think of poets as one who chronical the current known and unknown with the freedom to also explore honesty..
whether those moments be personal or larger, they are moments someone captured in their own unique way, allowing us to see through eyes we might not otherwise.

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2 posted 2010-08-05 01:55 PM


A lovely look into the soul of a poet, yann.
                                  Ida

2islander2
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3 posted 2010-08-06 04:33 AM


Thanks Cpat for the just and accurate comment...As you mean the point of view worth a lot, aren't we all sons of homer poetry ? I loved your words and their meaningful wisdom.

regards

yann

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4 posted 2010-08-06 04:33 AM


Thanks a lot Ida for sharing.

have a nice day

yann

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5 posted 2010-08-06 01:30 PM


great 'write' !

and what a grand line:

" A different sun hangs
  in the words of the poet ..."

I am also most fond of the phrase:

" multiple caresses of past..."

superb ending as well:

" ... staggering world which doesn’t
  know much better than the unrest of its soul(!)"

MUCH applause for this "penning" !!

2islander2
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6 posted 2010-08-06 01:43 PM


Hi Bruce, an applause from you is quite an achievment, I loved your appreciations about my write which made me happy...


have a nice and poetic day.


yann

Margherita
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7 posted 2010-08-09 08:16 AM


Wow, dear Yann, what an inspiring vision of poetry. Maybe it will induce me to take the pen ...

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2010-08-09 09:32 AM


Yann, you're a Poet Mann! Loved this!
Not only do you have the soul of a poet ~ you are a darn good one! Are you sure that English is not your first language? lol

Big hug coming your way from across the ocean,
Linda

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9 posted 2010-08-09 09:37 AM


Very wonderful.. it's a great peice of work
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10 posted 2010-08-09 01:50 PM


Bravo, Yann.. simply superb!  Well written, well said.  
~Amaryllis

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11 posted 2010-08-10 01:42 AM


I simply adore this
2islander2
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12 posted 2010-08-10 04:38 AM


hI margherita, thanks for commenting, I was missing your kind and advised comment...Don't feel hurry to take back pen it comes when it comes, sometimes we need to rest or do different things...It is nice to hear about you...

hugs

yann

2islander2
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13 posted 2010-08-10 04:40 AM


Ho Linda, So happy to hear about you again,it was a long time since you post..This day is wonderful and you made a such delightful comment...

hugs

yann

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14 posted 2010-08-10 04:41 AM


Thanks tattooedsweetheart07
  your comment is very appreciated , thanks for sharing, reading and coimmenting.

regards

yann

2islander2
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15 posted 2010-08-10 04:42 AM


Thanks Amaryllis for the kind supportive comment;..

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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16 posted 2010-08-10 04:43 AM


Hello PS, you are a so lovely person, thanks for reading and commenting.

hugs

yann

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17 posted 2010-08-12 12:33 PM


Yann - dang, so insightful and true it is. Found this writing to be something to think about...

BC

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