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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
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Mobile, AL

0 posted 2010-08-02 06:49 PM



Have I not given you faith
for ten years
or more
that you would bring my fairytale home?
Have you my soul
to give back to me
since you think it broken?
I have tried
to wait
while you made good on your promises.
i have tried to be patient
loving
kind
faithful
while you continued
to keep the distance between us.
I want
I want so many things
vague
I know
this is all vague
but I am afraid to release the spray of emotion
because the pressure is dangerous
for all involved.
Is it possible for one person to have your heart
and the other
your soul?

"Its gonna be alright cause I'm okay with me"

Jewel

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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-08-03 07:32 AM


Very nicely done....
one I will come back to and read again

enjoyed!

Eldest
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since 2010-06-15
Posts 177
Alabama
2 posted 2010-08-03 08:48 AM


good question, let us know if you find an answer
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2010-08-03 10:08 AM


tempting1..seems when we review what we have given to see if it should be enough, we realize it was/is too much for what we have received in return..nice to see you penning
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2010-08-05 12:32 PM


Nice...James
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