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Open Poetry #46

This Beach I'll Miss

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2010-08-27 10:24 PM

Spread out our towels, lay on our backs.
The day is calm, we can relax.
I'm laughing at all your wise cracks.
It's not an act, it's not an act.

You rub the lotion on my skin.
I feel your touch, can't help but grin.
You're getting closer, moving in.
Something begins, something begins.

The sun bakes down, producing heat.
Your boombox plays that catchy beat.
The waves are breaking near our feet.
I feel complete, I feel complete.

Suddenly, you take my hand.
You look so cute covered in sand.
Your lips are high in my demand,
This wasn't planned, this wasn't planned.

I move in close and steal a kiss.
I never could have pictured this.
Complete perfection, total bliss.
This beach I'll miss, this beach I'll miss.

*Amber

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2010-08-27 11:50 PM

Wonderful description of romance on a beach.
Enjoyed very much! Loved the rhymes!
Kat >^..^<

[This message has been edited by katahdin (08-28-2010 12:24 AM).]

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

2 posted 2010-08-28 11:33 AM

Thank you

*Amber

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-08-29 08:37 AM

Welcome to Pip!

This is absolutely lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

4 posted 2010-09-05 07:21 AM

This poem is fun!!!!!!!! Bring on the beach!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2010-09-06 01:03 AM

Nice...James

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