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I see you (for Kacy)
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I see you (for Kacy) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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in a remote moment I see you walk the understory bare feet clutching soil listening to the mountain I see you where dawn flies and sugar grass swollen as rosy sun dew wets your mouth I see you walk the river whorls of passion stilling your hands your fever I see you in the long quiet fields the dark stain of night spreading late green over your eyes I see you silent the blue blaze of sunrise watching remembering you then in the loss of a single heartbeat I watch you enter the forest ebb and change the world |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Perfection. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This is really lovely. Thank you,latearrival |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really like this...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Alison, Honeybunch, latearrival and James. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and in a remote moment, I shed a tear |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is just beautiful! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you ladies. her fair and open face stays with me and I think of her when I find myself in the company of trees and rivers, sunshine and rain ... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
touching...and beautifully done. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
wonderful Gaia imagery from one fine poet in tribute to another! ... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your write her in all her beauty, and adorn her with pure grace. And you dear Lady, are one grand, fine poetess. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lady Kate, I was so pleased to see your beaming face and winsome smile this morning.  Kacy has been sorely missed and you have brought her back to us through your lovely poem and visions. You captured her essence, perfectly.  Love 'n hugs, Linda |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This is Kacy and such a fine tribute from somebody who knows the feelings that Kacy had for nature and is able to convey it much as Kacy would....thank you... Goldenrose. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Cpat Hair. poet, I appreciate your kind words. thank you so much Lori. love and hugs to you dear Linda Angel.  thank you for your reply Goldenrose |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I read this before and was at a loss for words, and still am. But I was here...several times. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for being here Dixie! |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Truly beautiful.. I would have liked to have known her. Gorgeous tribute, Lady! ~Amaryllis |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully done! I have a feeling that she has read this in your heart, and is smiling. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Amaryllis Martie, I hope she is smiling. she always made me smile. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Perfect conclusion for a wonderful tribute to our dear Kacy. She was/is indeed someone who contributed to the healing of our world. Enjoyed this much, dear Kate, true poetess. Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Margherita. I always appreciate your comments. love, Kate |
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