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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2010-07-29 10:11 PM


The Casper wind,
massaged each street
like the depths of the west
and parallel streets, once they met.

The sailors showered the streets,
with their white uniforms
lighting the thick of the night,
their tired eyes fixated on the beer signs
along the musky streets.

The cafe' sat on the corner
its plush blue wallpaper, much like a virgin island,
isolated away from the noise,
as the calming music played - sangria lined another glass

To the patrons rejoicing about another tale
of adventure and gossip, of the sudden lucidity of their dreams
along the cache of smiles that surrounded the whispering tables

The sudden breeze tangled the hours together
Like the bread crumbs that gathered
Outside the cafe's two front doors.

The bourbon smell grew stronger,
cheers and jeers grew louder
along the coast of the nights back
where the hours stopped moving
as the sunrise took a step back,
so the town could stay awake for one more hour.

[This message has been edited by Tomer (07-30-2010 08:31 AM).]

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2010-07-30 12:11 PM




you have quite a voice Tomer
really enjoyed this

Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2010-08-02 08:23 PM


appreciate the comments.  Take care

Tomer

[This message has been edited by Tomer (08-02-2010 10:05 PM).]

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