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Rain |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
I hear the rain, tapping on the window Calling me to come out and play It tells me the flowers are out in the meadow I hear the rain The rain is puddling in the driveway I go and stand at the window It’s calling me to come out and play I wander out onto the porch to stand Thunder growls nearby in warning Today’s not a day to wander the land I hear the rain |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
rain can be both compelling and scary... nicely done Eldest. |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
Thank you, my daughter challenged to write in this style, although I don't remember what it is called. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
no matter what it's called it's lovely I crave rain but I live in the desert I enjoyed this |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
You paint a vivid picture of a moment in time. |
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