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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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Michigan

0 posted 2010-07-28 07:02 PM



I fought the chance to be outside my dreams
outside the realm of fantasy
in-between the drapes and windows

I waited for my chance to
rinse my hair of its curls
guided my eyes to a point

Where I could catch my lies
and turn them to truths
turn them like a soft melody marinating the night

Until the white arches
shadowed my body,
foot to pavement

With my neck softly lowering,
head steadily rising,
I could see my face next to the nectar of the wind

Hovering over the skyline,
watching above the arches of the city.

© Copyright 2010 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-08-04 02:12 PM


Interesting and appreciated. Took me a few readings, but then I am slow, slow, fast on that sometimes.

Careful doing those dark climbs, if you please.

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2010-08-04 08:26 PM


Thanks, Easy.  I'll be mindful of your advice.  Take care

Cheers

Tomer

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