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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2010-07-27 03:05 PM


               Awakenings

As an infinite twilight cloak of stars
  appears
amid a million sounds and scents
carried on the gentle evening breeze,
this path ends near the forest heart
beneath cliffs where clouds are born
that invite the spirit to arise and soar
from the ruins of a broken heart.

               --- b. e. adams (7/27/2010)



© Copyright 2010 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2010-07-27 03:09 PM


beautiful, loved taking in the visuals....going back for another read....

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
2 posted 2010-07-27 08:08 PM


Beautiful! I like your style.
Kat >^..^<

anya
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since 2002-07-27
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London, UK
3 posted 2010-07-27 11:28 PM


I love poetry that is succinct but that also manages to set an evocative tone which I feel you have done here wonderfully.
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2010-07-29 02:04 AM




sigh...

I love that cloak of stars


Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2010-08-02 01:23 PM


Another keeper, Poet.
                   Ida

2islander2
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by the sea
6 posted 2010-08-04 02:27 AM


beautiful, elevates the look and seeks solace for everyone.  enjoyed my read.

regards

yann

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