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tattooedsweetheart07
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0 posted 2010-07-26 09:36 AM


You're loving eyes help me when I can't see
You're loving arms are there to hold me when I need to be held
Loving you is just like loving God; you're always there when I need a someone
I don't know how I found you, and I can't explain how much I truly love you
You're loving hands help me up when I start to fall
You're loving touch is there when I need a simple loving touch
No one can compare to you, and no one can compare your love to anything
The finest gold, sliver, and all the gems and sparkling things can't compare to your love that you give to me
You make me happy when I'm sad
You make me laugh when I'm down
Nothing can compare to your love, you're my life and I wouldn't want to be anywhere else but in your arms no long expensive trip can compare to your love
You're touch, you're laughter, you're smile, and you're eyes
Everything you do makes me want to love you more

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1 posted 2010-07-26 06:26 PM


very sweet

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Saluting with misty eyes
2 posted 2010-07-27 01:41 PM


Everyone should have this in their life.
Great job.

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

tattooedsweetheart07
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3 posted 2010-07-27 09:42 PM


Thank you everyone. I try to please everyone when I write
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