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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-07-25 11:23 PM


Heavenly Beach

Somewhere between Barbers Point
and Ko Olina lies a perfect
stretch of beach;
where the sand is
as soft as silk,
where the water flows
like milk and honey,
where the trade winds caress you
like sweet morning dew,
where the sun warms your body,
heart and soul.
A blessed place where you'll
find grace, love and peace.
A silky place where all of
your cares will be eased.
A precious place that I
call Heavenly beach.

"When love lives softly in your heart
you will find your own Heavenly beach."

JamesLee
25July
2010







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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2010-07-26 12:05 PM




"When love lives softly in your heart
you will find your own Heavenly beach."


truly James
even in the middle of the desert.


easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
2 posted 2010-07-26 06:55 AM


A nice poem. Very optimistic.
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2010-07-26 07:40 AM


lovely thoughts, JamesM

Someday I would love to visit Hawaii~~

M

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2010-07-31 06:20 PM


grand-fine imagery ... great 'write' !

wish I was there!!

OldBuddyOldPal
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5 posted 2010-07-31 08:04 PM


very beautiful. I wish I were there.
graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03
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The Prairie Lands, USA
6 posted 2010-08-01 03:15 PM


I read this to my fiance and he said "I want to live there."


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2010-08-01 10:28 PM


Thank you Lady, easy1, nakdthoughts, secondhandreampoet, OldBuddyOldPal and graeshine for the wonderful responses...this is not so much about a physcal location as about a place within your heart where you develop an appreciation for the beauty around you...James
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
8 posted 2010-08-05 11:43 PM


Love the message James!  I've so often heard people convey something they deeply believe in, as that place, "where I live"

Very nice thoughts~ Thanks for this.

2islander2
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by the sea
9 posted 2010-08-06 01:46 PM


beautiful James, I crave for py heavenly beach...Great appplause.

yann

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