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katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2010-07-23 12:59 PM


My sexy man with bedroom eyes
Just one look and the battle's begun
But I can tell him no lies
He's already won

He gazes deeply into my eyes
With that smoldering look
It penetrates my soul and I sigh
He's got me hooked

His sensual look says...I want you!
My feelings I try to hide
But I want him too
So my love for him I confide

With passion filled eyes
He captures my heart
Surrender he cries
I was yours from the start

With those sexy eyes
Just one look and I melt
I give up willingly and sigh
More loved I have never felt

My sexy man with those bedroom eyes

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Eldest
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1 posted 2010-07-23 08:44 AM


Now I have to stop and fan!
The Sky is Imagination
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OK, US
2 posted 2010-07-23 02:32 PM


Very well said and passionate!
HeliaHeart
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Georgia
3 posted 2010-07-23 03:44 PM


Ooh, that was heady and interesting. Well written!
Eterne
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Quebec, Canada
4 posted 2010-07-23 10:26 PM


Very sweet!
katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
5 posted 2010-07-24 07:39 PM


Thank you all. I wrote this to my boyfriend because he has bedroom eyes. He loved it!
Kat >^..^<

The Lady
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6 posted 2010-07-29 02:06 AM




of course he did
and he loves you too, I'd wager

nice work Kat

easy1
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7 posted 2010-07-29 07:10 AM


How fortunate the author is to have such a generous and attractive lover. May it long be so.
LeeJ
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8 posted 2010-07-29 07:16 AM


very pretty
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Member Rara Avis
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9 posted 2010-07-29 11:07 AM


Hmmm, very nice.  Gotta love them bedroom eyes, huh.  

A

Daddy Goose38
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since 2010-09-04
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obama's a rice paper tiger
10 posted 2012-05-27 08:23 PM


I can even hear the moans and pleading cries,
The elemental passion's sighs.
The wordless singing of desire! Karen!

Daddy Goose38
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obama's a rice paper tiger
11 posted 2017-06-26 07:47 PM


Karen!!!!!!
This is Daddygoose.
It must be the living spirit of the mountain
Speaking silently as well.
:-------)
Daddygoose

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