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Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
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0 posted 2010-07-21 11:17 PM


My love and I strolled outside.
In the flower garden.
Beautiful and scenic.

It was cloudy in the sky above.
It began to shower raindrops of love.
You and I darling became drenched.
Wet with droplets from above.

Love raindrops look good on your face.
From your lips they give a sweet taste.
In your hair they smell so sweet.
Soft rain and you darling.
Heaven's special treat.

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2010-07-22 10:20 AM


very sweetly written Lamar
funny how rain or water can enhance the beauty we see in another.

The Sky is Imagination
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since 2010-07-09
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2 posted 2010-07-22 03:28 PM


I really like this! It makes me think of the pleasant smell of wet grass and flowers. It also makes me think of a song from an anime called "Rain of Love". God I'm such nerd lol...
Eterne
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since 2010-07-21
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3 posted 2010-07-22 10:56 PM


Very lovely!
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