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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2010-07-21 08:50 PM



In Solitaire

One step at a time,
I have eased into
a rhythym of summer's trace.
In the light of the day
you have captured me,
a spirit beyond a face.

No second thoughts
to change the scheme.
Just black and white revised.
But the nature of this melody
fragments the undisguised.

It's the final thoughts
in heat of the day,
still pondering what might fare.
As the sun loses hold
it's tomorrow's gain,
while dreaming in solitaire.


M borrowing some phrases to inspire me

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2010 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2010-07-21 09:43 PM


fine 'write' !

folks seem to be ignoring mine these days ...
the most recent one is disappearing down the
"P.I.P.-land" queue with only one comment/reply.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2010-07-22 07:32 AM


Thanks, Bruce. I'll check it out.


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Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-07-22 10:26 AM


borrowed phrases or not ma'am, you have written a nice piece here..
there is both a bit of mystery around it as well as an honest look inside, should people want to read between their own lines and see what you have offered.

enjoyed!

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
4 posted 2010-07-22 12:17 PM


I enjoyed reading your poetry once again.  It seems to flow so effortlessly from your pen!  Great writing!


miscellanea  

Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
Posts 274

5 posted 2010-07-22 10:57 PM


Nice.
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