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blankmirrors
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since 2010-07-16
Posts 14


0 posted 2010-07-20 11:48 AM



Inside our room,
Among years made of hours,
We sit on chairs,
Which fold like pain,
Shutting that which cannot be shut:
The immense solitude.

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2010-07-20 12:01 PM


raquel...welcome to the PIPzoo..

enjoyed your first post..mature and well decorated.

Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2010-07-20 12:28 PM


Ditto what Dark said about your post..

and the welcome...

nice offering

easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2010-07-20 05:10 PM


Welcome. Yes, slamming one of those metal folding chairs shut can make a wordless statement.

Very good first post, imho.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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4 posted 2010-07-20 05:27 PM


Welcome, Raquel...

"irreversible habit of writing"...

Exactly.

Brava!

Looking forward to much more from you.

Whilst I await, please check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2010-07-21 12:07 PM


Welcome, Blankmirrors. Enjoyed your first  post.
                           Ida

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6 posted 2010-07-21 12:44 PM


Wonderful!  I have been busy reading your poetry at your site, and learning a lesson from you.  More is said in few words, and is much more interesting.  Beautiful work, welcome to Passions.

Words are weapons, toss them with care.
~ Mysteria ~

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