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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2010-07-19 10:25 AM


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A new woman downstairs—
Ah restless fireflies
No one’s nineteen anymore


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easy1
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1 posted 2010-07-19 03:39 PM


Interesting, and a bit strange (to me) that you should choose nineteen. Maybe a matinee and a cafeteria lunch? Hope springs eternal - enjoyed reading this.
Huan Yi
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2 posted 2010-07-19 05:15 PM


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easy,

The reference is to an old Japanese poem:


how long forever
nineteen nineteen
of white dancers


Anonymous


Nineteen was considered the height
of a woman's beauty in Japan.  I think
here it was/is considered the height of
a man's sexual drive.  

Thanks for reading


John


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2010-07-19 07:26 PM


I think I was very immature at nineteen but then I'm not Japanese.
                                 Ida

easy1
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4 posted 2010-07-20 04:00 AM


^lol

Thanks for the explanation.

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