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Open Poetry #46

Words Of Goodbye

tattooedsweetheart07
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since 2010-07-11

Posts 86
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0 posted 2010-07-18 09:52 PM

Your words of goodbye,
Hit my heart like a cannon ball hitting a ship
My tears flow down my face,
Like a mad furious river
My heart broken heart,
Is sinking like a ship in my tears
My hopes and dreams,
Are drowning like the people on a sinking boat
My mind,
Is filling up with all the memories of us
When will this madness stop
Why are you doing this to me
When will I ever know?
The madness will never stop,
The thoughts of you doing this to me will never end
And me ever knowing will never be told
When will I love you again?
When will you be mine again?
When will I be happy?
Me loving you again will never stop,
You being mine will come again,
And I'll never be happy with out you in my life

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-07-19 01:01 AM

A good composition - I like the sinking ship analogy and the play on "ever" and "never", too.
May the author find happiness, perhaps even mutual happiness.

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