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Open Poetry #46

Don't Be Afraid

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2010-07-18 11:16 AM

Don't Be Afaird
Don't be afaird
Of a darkness
Don't be afaird
Of time
Closing in you
This is life
Life is short
Don't be afarid
Of someone
This is life
That carrys on
Move on
This is your life
Take it
Make it
Throught this life
Life that goes so slowly sometimes
Don't be afraid
Of being late
Let our heartbeat
Through these years
Let our life take through we breathe
Don't be afaird of what you are?
Life becomes lonely
Yes it does
But still this is life
Don't be afraid of what you are

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2010-07-18 11:53 AM

vandana, this is one of your best! What a great sentiment for living each day! Fear is the enemy and so often we are afraid of things we shouldn't be afraid of.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-07-18 05:05 PM

It does take hope, so, much appreciated.

"Be not afraid of the universe."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-07-18 05:32 PM

Well said...James

The Sky is Imagination
Junior Member

since 2010-07-09

Posts 25
OK, US

4 posted 2010-07-20 02:40 PM

Great! I love the optimism in your poem.

Dadygoose
Member

since 2010-01-01

Posts 162
A Communist country

5 posted 2010-07-20 05:06 PM

Vandana,
This jumped out at me because I wrote something with the same title but it was kind of crummy and I wanted to have it deleted --- I like yours better.
Take care okay?
DG

Hey, nobody's human!

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