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Open Poetry #46
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rockaustin
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since 2010-07-16
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0 posted 2010-07-16 12:31 PM


I'd always put you before myself
Give you what you deserve
but I'm still on the shelf
and will remain on reserve

the standard you have set
May never be overthrown
this I am sure to bet
my thoughts I do not bemoan

Go walk wherever you may
March towards what you desire
and I won't make you sway
as long as dreams transpire

If all else begins to fail
race toward the other direction
I promise you will prevail
atop a throne of affection

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2010-07-16 11:36 AM


good rhyme scheme, sad story

made me think some about my past

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