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Tomer
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0 posted 2010-07-14 01:01 AM



She was singing as if the stage was her own
as if she could be the audience and watch herself,
where the minutes watched her move, then rewinded to watch her again.

It was on this stage,
She could let herself feel real,
let her hair glance at the floor
while she danced until her shoes would run dry.

It was here where she made the pain
leave along the rainy basins that waited outside,
where her dull thoughts became fire with the wind,

She kept waiting, waiting until she could return
To a place where she could love herself
like the fleeting thoughts she had as a child,

It was her night to let go,
to be on a ledge and never fall,
and chase the chills until
she could stand along the gasping night
run her voice through it's chills
and gather the sun for another meeting,

Another day of thoughts,
of bittersweet goodbyes,
It was here, on this stage,
She could get away.

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1 posted 2010-07-14 09:41 AM


escape within the place she loved, where she could be....

nice read poet~

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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2 posted 2010-07-14 08:48 PM


Happy you enjoyed.   Take care

Tomer

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