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Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2010-07-13 01:40 PM

    I wonder how the curve of hip would fit to me?
If the soft would cradle the harder lines I am
As in a meld of form, our own blurred
Into charcoal sketches of love spent
And our stains the blend of scents
To waft on cool nights breeze

She watches the light and I
Watch the lines it draws upon her chest
And begin to form rhymes of vowels
To remind me of the soft breath of moans
with the feel of her
Under my hands

Come stand…..  and I will lay prayers
Of staccato verbs upon your throat
Then kneel
              To honor the way glyphs
Are formed upon the skin when light
Through lace is a form its own
And circles traced by hips sway
Bring silver bells voice
That speaks in whispers of the slave
You have become to this
And
        me

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2010-07-13 01:42 PM

ohhhhh damn~*~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2010-07-13 01:45 PM

thank you ma'am....
your damn is greatly appreciated...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2010-07-13 02:41 PM

gps might be the most direct route,
but one sure can miss a lot of special
points of interest ...enjoyed the tour

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2010-07-13 02:49 PM

sometimes one doesn't mind taking the long way.....

thanks for the eyes DS

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2010-07-13 07:38 PM

just had to get another glimpse~*~*~*~*~ <3

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2010-07-13 08:39 PM

My oh my oh my! This could be the ultimate love poem, good sir. I'd say this lady has you well-terrained.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2010-07-13 10:57 PM

Wow ...How cool is this?

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2010-07-14 07:16 AM

Dixie and I differ. I think it's a "hot" write.

But I actually do know what she means so, yes, it's very "cool". Well done!

Helen

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2010-07-14 07:55 AM

Mr. Deer, sir.... thanks so kindly for the eyes and nice words..
appreciate your dropping in

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (07-14-2010 10:22 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2010-07-14 07:56 AM

Passing Shadows...
thank you ma'am for the kind comment...
glad you thought it was cool...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2010-07-14 07:56 AM

Ms Bunch.... hopefully it was not too hot...
many thanks for the eyes and the words you left.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2010-07-14 07:58 AM

Mapping the blue sighways
as only you can.

Smiling...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

13 posted 2010-07-14 08:03 AM

thanks Ms Sun...
not sure about mapping any sighways...
but thank you for dropping in, and the nice words ma'am

tattooedsweetheart07
Member

since 2010-07-11

Posts 86
Pa

14 posted 2010-07-14 08:39 AM

Wow every sexy and hot poem... It's also very moving in a way...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

15 posted 2010-07-14 08:42 AM

thank you ma'am... I appreciate your dropping in and taking the time to leave a few words.

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