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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-07-12 12:55 PM


shivering bodice
indigo soul of jujun
releasing silk sins

your eyes spoke to my hands
how they were calloused from the sea
and my mind was leather lechery
perhaps beyond redemptions ability

silk is saliva
ornaments are woman shapes
pressed to sigh windows

your filament was of fragile metal
like almost forgotten lovers in dreams
but you whispered nawashi was a god
and you had time to be forgiven slowly

white rope kinbaku
night is velvet diamond
for dark jujun waits?

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daark (white rope series)

scribblenote...shibari or kinbaku is being used (although not in it's purest form) much like tattoos and or henna art...the jujun models are decorated by the ornate shibari art and are topics of study for photoart as well as some fine tattoo flash.


  

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bel1e
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1 posted 2010-07-12 01:19 PM


wow

         

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-07-12 01:23 PM


I'll echo the Belle..

your white rope series seems to be at some risk of combustion...at least the readers may be...

a pleasure always sir~

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2010-07-12 01:23 PM


thanks bb-bel1e

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thanks cpat..based on my old boy scout days, knot tying, not trying and nought lying..

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2010-07-12 01:34 PM


(chuckling)  I'm sure it is not for naught you learned boy scout knots sir
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2010-07-12 02:30 PM


Cpat..only for the knotty stuff never the naughty stuff..true story 268
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