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Open Poetry #46

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tattooedsweetheart07
Member

since 2010-07-11

Posts 86
Pa

0 posted 2010-07-12 07:55 AM

Love is the tender soft touch of your fingertips across my soft sweet lips
It's the way you hold me in your arms, so close
When I hear your heart beat it sounds like waves racing their way across the sands
It's the way you cherish every little thing I do for you, even if it's not the way you like
It's the way you look into my brown eyes, and I can hear the words I love you
Love is the way you catch me before I fall
When you hold my hand while we walk,
You show me that you're proud to show everyone that I belong to you
It's the way you would drive 10,000 miles just to see me smile
Love is the way you can't get me off your mind,
When I'm far away from you
That is what love is

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-07-12 01:40 PM

Love is~~ so many things ma'am...
you've named a few of the nicer ones here..

lots to think about when you talk of love..

enjoyed.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2010-07-12 02:32 PM

and it sucks if you have it in tennis...grin
enjoyed your heartspeak lady!

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

3 posted 2010-07-12 02:45 PM

Those in mutual love really do belong to each other.

I like this line especially:

When I hear your heart beat it sounds like waves racing their way across the sands

tattooedsweetheart07
Member

since 2010-07-11

Posts 86
Pa

4 posted 2010-07-12 03:25 PM

Thank you so very much everyone I try my best to write what comes my my mind... but lately I just feel like my work isn't the best as what it use to be

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