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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
Hidden eyes, that I hide; Hold a story that I can't deny... It's a story of lies, asumptions,envy, and lust; My heart can't tolerate to restrain inside... This excruciating pain is suffocating me inside; When will this pain I feel inside dissipate? These eyes of mine can't hold back the misery kept inside; So I weep tears of woe... Attempting to disregard the feelings that I feel; As I close my eyes tight... Thrusting way everything that I see inside; All behind my hidden eyes... |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Attempting to disregard the feelings that I feel; GREAT lines... If this is how you introduce yourself to us, I can hardly wait to read the next offering. Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE |
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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
Thank you so much Ringo, for reading my poems... I'm glad you liked them as much as you did |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
As much as we try, the eyes just never lie do they? This was wonderful. Richard xx |
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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
Thank you so much Richie... no eyes don't really hold anything in... you can always tell someone just by looking in their eyes... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
TSH that is a very sad poignant poem my dear and I really feel for you, but don't loose faith, keep up a bright attitude and I'm sure things will get better soon. Good luck. Lindsay |
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