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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-07-08 07:04 PM



Where Love Survives

She was driving
she lost control
I lost my love
I miss her so.

Love lives on
though earthly bodies die
in heaven she waits
where love survives.

JamesLee
07July
2010

I didn't lose
my love.



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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2010-07-09 07:47 AM


well said James... the belief that love survives past the life we have here, is a comfort to so many....
easy1
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2 posted 2010-07-09 09:08 AM


Poignant and well-crafted. My sympathy to the writer, of course.

"Because the truth is hard to swallow, that's what the wall of love is for." Personally, I do believe in Heaven (and Hell), and really do trust many of the NDE interviewees' accounts.

2islander2
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3 posted 2010-07-09 11:53 AM


hello James, enjoyed your poem and what it conveys...

best wishes

yann

Lamar Cole
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4 posted 2010-07-11 12:27 PM


Very touching.
LindsayP
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5 posted 2010-07-11 09:28 PM




Nice write James, enjoyed

Lindsay

D.Lester Young
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6 posted 2010-07-11 10:31 PM


Powerful piece
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