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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2010-07-07 05:29 AM





Parchment shouldn't taste of meat;

I smile a row of pearls of need

outlined in the crimson creed

ghastly lusting leaning

sweet

woman stamen pistoling

and freed

like vanilla

grinding greed

I saw her

white

in purity

dancing like a daisy

we

sang together

harmony

and leaned in lust

of gathering

touching our lips

velveteen

laughing

as the crowd threw coin....

in the tween of spark.


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bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
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1 posted 2010-07-07 06:58 AM


wow~ what a great opening line !

great stuff~~~Serenity~~~

         

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
2 posted 2010-07-07 07:05 AM


fun to watch this one seep from your mind lips...
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2010-07-07 11:01 AM


enjoyed... you have always impressed me with the word play and visuals that come from your unique you..

a pleasure...

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