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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 07-06-2010 03:28 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


I noticed your fingers were tan
and your eyes didn't mind laughing sometimes
you were taller than the other women
that leaned against morning coffee moments

we could have talked about eros or arrows
or the headlines on the news, like lipstick
applied way too thick to be attractive
but overdone anyway, just to sell more ink

but instead we were quietly professional kinda
nothing much to do but wonder what the other
was thinking they wished they could say
but wouldn't this soon after not really meeting

we would take awhile like numbers in line
acting surprised when we noticed the other
like it was karma or commas between maybes
and we just accidentely happened to be there

at almost the same time every other next time


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daark

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bel1e
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1 posted 07-06-2010 06:35 PM       View Profile for bel1e   Email bel1e   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bel1e

Love the coy appeal to this,  Darkkk.  

         

Krawdad
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2 posted 07-06-2010 08:00 PM       View Profile for Krawdad   Email Krawdad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krawdad

As per usual
you live up to you titles.
I know at least
part of the reason for this.
If only I
could manage to do the same.


e
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 07-07-2010 05:50 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

babybel1e, thanks little one...

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KD, thanks amigo for the review...much appreciated
serenity blaze
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4 posted 07-07-2010 06:05 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

you are a very talented poet.

Would it offend you if I say I like your mind?

I am a fan. You remind me of this guy I knew, he was blind, but he would take wire cable and bend 'em into trees.

You know why I'm telling you this story, right?



enjoyed
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 07-07-2010 07:02 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms serene..thanks lady...we might have known the same guy (true story)...I am humbled at your comment..
Cpat Hair
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6 posted 07-07-2010 02:30 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Love the way you see Sir... the landscape of people, the coulda or woulds or dids....

I admire the talent sir... greatly
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 07-07-2010 03:18 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks Cpat...you bless me sir
faithmairee
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8 posted 01-09-2011 03:44 PM       View Profile for faithmairee   Email faithmairee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit faithmairee's Home Page   View IP for faithmairee

i'm convinced now after having read so many of your poems that you are from a style standpoint the king of cool and a master of the art of writing poetry...love your stuff!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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9 posted 01-09-2011 07:56 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Y'gotta love Karma.

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 01-10-2011 08:51 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms faith...humble thanks I do drink kool aid to help..grin

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ms sun..yep karma with some mocca and vanilla sure makes coffee yucky..thanks babe
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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11 posted 01-13-2011 07:32 AM       View Profile for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Email s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit s1nfully_1nn0c3nt's Home Page   View IP for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt

"at almost the same time every other next time"

Only you could've thought that up. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 01-13-2011 08:17 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms sinz...thanks lady!!
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