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It feels right
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It feels right |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
It's night A beautiful sight The moon so bright It feels right Our love takes flight I'm high as a kite Love to great height So hold me tight Till daylight My love, goodnight |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
This poem has a musical and almost prayer-like feeling about it. I would never have dared the rhymes, but they work. A good read. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Bastet, thank you for your coments. I didn't see it as prayer-like but you are right. Kat >^..^< |
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