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Open Poetry #46
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Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
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0 posted 2010-07-04 03:05 AM


It's funny how a bad outlook on life can change everything
One minute you think the sky is the limit
The next you're looking down at the ground trying to picture yourself in it
Your mind is stressed
Your soul is hurt
You think your pain will forever be fossilized in the dirt
Just waiting on the big bang….fireworks

The flashes of light are pretty
Look at how it unites the city
It's amazing
How people are amazed at the diversity of the colors
And disgusted at the diversity of each other
Colorful explosives ignite to entertain the mind
While taking attention away from the dark heart
But with the right spark
We can destroy all the negativity that lurks…..fireworks



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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2010-07-04 12:42 PM


I like the poem and its insight message...Keep on the good work.

regards

yann

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