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Lamar Cole
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0 posted 2010-07-02 03:44 PM



Darling, you are really on fire tonight.
Explosive like dynamite.
Exciting like fireworks at night.
Making passion rise.
With those sultry bedroom eyes.

Ready to explode like TNT.
With sweet love just for me.
Passion tonight is like nitro.
What a beautiful morning afterglow.

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Earl Brinkman
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1 posted 2010-07-03 08:17 AM


She must be some Muse!  Isn`t it great to be in love?
Earl Brinkman
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2 posted 2010-07-03 08:18 AM


She must be some Muse!  Isn`t it great to be in love?
Earl Brinkman
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3 posted 2010-07-03 08:20 AM


She must be some Muse!  Isn`t it great to be in love?
Earl Brinkman
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4 posted 2010-07-03 08:22 AM


Sorry for the multiple messages, there was an error with the site and my computer.
zeusthamghty
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west virginia, usa
5 posted 2010-07-04 12:20 PM


wow you are one lucky person to have found a love like that.
Richy
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6 posted 2010-07-04 05:58 AM



Hey we're going to have to start calling you, Picollo Pete!

Great stuff here Lamar!

Happy Fourth of July!
Richard

2islander2
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by the sea
7 posted 2010-07-04 12:39 PM


Nice metaphor, best wishes

yann

LindsayP
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8 posted 2010-07-07 10:32 PM



It sounds like you have a very enjoyable

night coming up Lamar. Good luck to you.

Lindsay

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