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The Return
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The Return |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Return He comes again to my bosom by way of air and familiarity past all silence, slicing through miles, sundering the shuddering thought of distance. Finally. I breathe again, knowing something must be right in his world; sensing that his return to this, my nest, is our miracle. Finally. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah~ now here you paint with words the hear that care for someone. But, we all know you have a big heart and care for everyone, os it is no surprise. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
set em free and if they return they are yours forever? kewl vibes lady |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cpat...you telling me I can't surprise anyone any more?  ...thanks, my friend, for your eyes.DS...sometimes freedom giving is quite out of our hands...even in the most close-knit circumstances, people can be estranged by only a room's distance. But it is all still kewl.  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
WIHWT! You write with such heart! Did I mention how your writing touches me? It does! It is always heart warming when distance between a loved one is overcome. With happy hugs, misce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Reunions, especially of the heart, are always beautiful, Karilea, as are your words!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I feel I know this tale Karilea deeply beautiful |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Misc'e, Denise, Kate... it's the familiar that glues us.  Thank you...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...love is forever but sometimes it can feel like a return. Love the heart in this. |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Quite Lovely. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
All is wonderful, but the first stanza . . . awesome! j. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Loved the feeling of family and love. Kat >^..^< |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
"The poem is an expression of your whole being at the moment of vision." - Richard Eberhart You have put your whole being into this poem and breathed beautiful imagery into the moment of this very significant return. Bravo. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sis..a good love...is knowing who will return... Lamar, thank you for your eyes... jwes...the awes have it! Kat...thank you. I hope you grow to appreciate PiP as much as I have in the last eleven years! Bastet - to be appreciated with an excerpt or a quote from someone of art is a true gift, indeed. To be aligned with substance can give a hopeful, heart. Thank you! |
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