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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2010-07-02 05:33 AM


It’s a lazy sun that rises now
as if passion dead and gone
and the sky that once inspired
no longer energized.

I talk as if I can be heard
like hope whispers in the night
and think of good and better days
as if they’ll come again.

But today I watch the inter-play
and the bounce of blame
and how the clouds gather in
both sides of every game.

And then the breeze of grace
brushes tenderly my face
and I know to humbly bow
to all that is and must be.

All that must be now for then
and so crumbles every dream
amidst the tears we all must cry
until passion again energized.

Helen / 2 July 2010


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2010-07-02 12:08 PM


But today I watch the inter-play
and the bounce of blame
and how the clouds gather in
both sides of every game.

And then the breeze of grace
brushes tenderly my face
and I know to humbly bow
to all that is and must be.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If I didn't know better I would think you're in my head!
I'm relating to this way too much, so I thank you for your poem and virtual shoulder to lean on.

Hugs, Helen~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2010-07-02 12:40 PM


ms H...enjoyed your patiece suggested here..anxious patience..
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2010-07-02 03:57 PM


Thanks, Bluesy.  If memory serves me right I've been in your head a few times over the years.     Not sure how strong my shoulders are these days but am always willing to lend them.

Mr. Dark - Thank you.  Yes, anxious patience is right but in this instance not for myself.  

Helen

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